【你不是沒料，是寫錯話】科技人英文履歷常犯的 5 個錯誤

（Ｘ） 1. “Responsible for…” 全履歷都是你「負責」，卻看不到你「做到」什麼

Responsible for firmware testing and documentation.

Responsible for managing project timeline.

 問題在於：這些句子像是在複製 job description，沒有表現出你價值。

（Ｏ）更專業的說法：

Executed system-level firmware testing across 3 product lines, reducing bug count by 35%.

Managed project timeline for a cross-functional team of 12, delivering ahead of schedule.

（Ｘ） 2. Buzzwords 空泛疊字：「teamwork, communication, hardworking」寫再多也不加分

Good communication skill.

Strong sense of teamwork and responsibility.

 問題在於：這些詞看似正面，但內容空洞、沒細節，HR早已看膩。

（Ｏ）更具體說法：

Presented weekly updates to stakeholders from engineering, design, and operations.

Facilitated remote collaboration across 4 time zones during a 6-month product launch.

（Ｘ） 3. 錯把「知道」當「會用」：Familiar with / Know how to

Familiar with Python and Git.

Know how to use Tableau.

 問題在於：familiar / know how to 代表「看過、了解」，不代表你真的能解決問題。

（Ｏ）更精準的說法：

Proficient in Python and Git; developed automation tools for deployment and version control.

Used Tableau to build real-time dashboards tracking KPIs for 3 product teams.

（Ｘ） 4. 中式說法外國人看不懂：「cost down project」不是英文！

Led a cost down project for server production.

 外國主管會皺眉：What’s a “cost down project”?

（正確英文會說 “cost reduction” 或 “cost-saving measures”）

（Ｏ）修正寫法：

Led a cost-reduction initiative that cut server production cost by 12%.

Identified vendor consolidation opportunities, saving $300K annually.

（Ｘ） 5. 時間、成效、數據都沒有——看不到「你做了什麼、造成什麼影響」

Developed internal tool for task management.

Participated in hardware design process.

 問題在於：這些句子沒有成果、沒有變化，就像背景介紹。

（Ｏ）改寫範例：

Developed internal task management tool that reduced daily planning time by 40%.

Participated in circuit redesign that improved thermal performance by 15%.

結語：你不是沒做事，而是沒「寫對」

好的英文履歷不是「翻譯好的中文」，而是用國際職場的語言呈現你創造的價值。

給科技人 3 個關鍵提醒：

用動詞開頭，不是「負責」而是「做到」

加數據、成效，讓人看得到你解決的問題

別用 buzzwords，改用「動作 + 成果」展現軟實力

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